Shade the Hedgehog Restart

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August 9th, 2014, 4:10 pm

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ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
August 9th, 2014, 4:10 pm
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Sprites belong to there rightful owners.
Plz Rate,Comment, and/or Fav.


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Advertisement
Posted by Advertisement
August 9th, 2014, 4:13 pm
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since when was sonic a sith lord



Moon light madness
Posted by Moon light madness
August 9th, 2014, 4:17 pm
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@Advertisement: Ever since he changed his name, changed his quills, and bought some clothes.
XD



The_Project
Posted by The_Project
August 9th, 2014, 4:18 pm
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@Advertisement: he is in starwars land.



Ruan
Posted by Ruan
August 9th, 2014, 6:18 pm
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Great comic! Damn copa can be pretty brutal. Don't kill the messenger, man

Did you get my cameo?



ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
August 10th, 2014, 1:40 pm
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@Ruan: yep got it.i was late.



The Magnificent Z
Posted by The Magnificent Z
August 11th, 2014, 6:22 pm
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Good setup. Decent if uninspired character designs.

Dialogue needs a lot of work however, as does the plot. Whenever you're writing dialogue, always ask yourself if that's how you would say it while talking to someone.

Also never, ever use numerals such as 2 or 3 instead of the words two or three until you get past ten. It looks all whacked out while being spoken.

And if it's fair to say... the plot resembles Dark Age just a liiiiiittle bit.



ShadowSaiyanXD
Posted by ShadowSaiyanXD
August 12th, 2014, 4:27 pm
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@The Magnificent Z :To be honest whenever I write out the dialogue I often paste them all into lines that fit
A perfect rectangle shape without a bit of space being left.I had the idea of this comic before I knew about Dark Age of Mobius. Thought I do think I need to improve a lot more.



Moon light madness
Posted by Moon light madness
August 17th, 2014, 12:05 am
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@ShadowSaiyanXD: Hmmmm copa does seem like he is on a bit on the evil side. Wonder what Kat will think of him?



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